Fullmetal alchemist: The land of sand is written by Makoto Inoue.
You will follow two brothers, Edward and Alphonse Elric and their search for the one and only cure to help Alphonse out of a rusty metal armor.
Alphonse died in a very young age. Edward, Alphonse big brother called a witch doctor to help his him back to life. But it didn´t succeeded fully. Hes soul were placed inside this armor util they find a cure.
Edward, the tiny, longblond haired boy with a goal to become a fullmetal alchemist. He wants to learn how to create the Philosopher's Stone, which can help his little brother back to his own body.
Alphonse, Edwards little uncertained brother who always seems to be right, even the time he dont want to.
Edward seems to be a really nice guy and brother. Purposeful as he is, he wont let his brother down. He puts everything behind, just to help Alphonse.
Really, who doesn´t want a brother like Edward.
Alphonse lookes up to his brother. He wants to be brave as his brother. But Alphonse is a little chicken. But we love him anyway.
These two guys will make history in their own world, and im sure they will find a cure.
To be continued
Jesper
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My english isn´t the best one, but let me know there is any grammer faults.. ^^
SvaraRaderai know it is :P
SvaraRaderaGood job Jesper! I can't come across that many grammar faults but there are a few though: "It didn't succeed fully..." (no -ed in the end here), "...even the time he doesn't want to" (always does/doesn't with he,she,it) Also think about the difference between his and he's. He's = Han är, His = Hans. Lastly you need to be more careful with details such as I needs to be spelled with a capital "I". Hope this is helpful feedback. Keep up the good ambitious work and have a nice weekend! /Teresa
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